The Dutch Mob

In Game Name: Aedan McGregor

Organization Name: The Duch Mob

Organization Type: Illegal

Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:9207213


Organization Role: PickPocket

Organization History: It begins during the late nineteenth century in The sate of NYC .
Formed during the late 1860s by Deaden 'Flying hands' McGregor ( Aedan McGregors Grand Father) , "Sheeny" Mike Kurtz, and Johnny Irving, former members of the Italian Dave Gang, the Dutch Mob soon became one of the largest pickpocket gangs in the United States numbering around 300 members. A common tactic of the gang was to stage a street fight and pickpocket the gathering crowd. A variation of this technique was to have several gang members pick a fight with a victim where he would be "rescued" by other gang members posing as innocent bystanders and have his pockets picked while being rushed through the crowd.



Past RP Experience: I got years of rp exp i did play icecave and al that old servers

Jobs/Salary:
Org Jobs: TDM Leader $ 65 - Runs the whole Org and is a pro in pickpocking he dominates The postawa street & The Park Street.
TDM Right hand $ 60 - He helps run the ldr and helps him make desicions.
TDM PickPocket Trainer $ 50 - He trains The New comers how to Pickpocket.
TDM PickPocket Guy $ 40 - Its Like a pizza boy call this guy and he pickpocket and kils te guy who need to be eliminated.
TDM New Comer $ 35 - Its a new comer he needs to prove him self

Policies / Need to knows :
One : Its Owned By a Real Dutch man
Two : We dont assasinate or deal
Three : We only PickPock

Sounds nice.
Since the russian org guys dont play for some time Yakuza will need competition 2 get the heat.
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Heihachi Yamashita wrote:Sounds nice.
Since the russian org guys dont play for some time Yakuza will need competition 2 get the heat.
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+1
But there is many Illegal orgs. So I don't know what to think.
but anyway, nice app. Good luck!

Yeah i agree with u Esan, 2 be honest idk how many orgs are there.
Lots of ppl playing there.
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Fairly detailed application. Knowing there are many organizations already, I'm looking for more detailed applications to fit in or maybe even replace an inactive organization. Try adding some more information.

Pending

Waiting on Bishops Answer.

I dont see the russian org leaded by pat in like 2 weeks or more.
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Jobs/Salary:
Org Jobs: TDM Leader $ 65 - Runs the whole Org and is a pro in pickpocking he dominates The postawa street & The Park Street.
TDM Right hand $ 60 - He helps run the ldr and helps him make desicions.
TDM PickPocket Trainer $ 50 - He trains The New comers how to Pickpocket.
TDM Dealer $45 - Deals drugs and guns
TDM PickPocket Guy $ 40 - Its Like a pizza boy call this guy and he pickpocket and kils te guy who need to be eliminated.
TDM New Comer $ 35 - Its a new comer he needs to prove him self

Extra : We are a realy crime org
And We pwn !

Hmm... The Idea of The Dutch Mob is pretty creative, because it's a mafia and it's not the overused idea of an Italian/Sicilian Mafia but I think you should've put more time and effort into this application because it's a pretty good idea, but delivered mediocrely, and I've seen you role-play on Martial Law RP, as a employee working at the club, but you role-played a more neutral character then rather a Dutch Mobster, I'm not sure how you manage things as a criminal but like I said, I like this idea and hopefully will be executed well while you role-play as the Boss and maybe you'll be able to role-play with my organization and perhaps we could become partners.... or arch-enemies. Only Time Will Tell..............